谁能帮我修改这篇文章``!!!

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I hope I can take part at this match for a long time.But I don’t took part at in this match before I go to the junior school.Because I am too small for it.In this time,when I hear this new,I am happied and excited.I prepare it for a long time.Words,grammar and others.My family also want me to take part at this match.And I love English very much.This is a reason for why do I want to take part in this match.I want to have an appointment with you!English!

take part in
don’t took part at -didn't take part
go to the junior school-go to junior school
when I hear this new-when I heard this new
am happied and excited-was happy and excited
My family also want me to take part (at改为in) this match
This is a reason for why I want to take part in this match.
不一定对

I hope I can take part (at改为in)
But I don’t (took改为take) part (at去掉) in this match
My family also want me to take part (at改为in) this match
This is (a改为the) reason (for why do 直接why就行了)
应该还有些没改出来了,不好意思,能力有限。。希望能帮到你